This is part of a story I made in wich Celestia and Torch fight Tirek together during his first try to take over equestria (I later realized it was very unlikely that Torch was involved since it happened during Starswirl time and I doubt Torch is that old).
So, I was thinking about drawing it but since I never drew a comic before, I wanted to make a test and did this page.
I'd like to know if it's clear and easy to understand and if the panels are well organized.
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