And here it is! Woot. What I learned in the process of this post was a simple phrase: The perfect is the enemy of the good. Basically, If I try to get everything just so, I'll end up going nowhere fast. At any rate, while working on this, I became inspired to do something! I figured the story would stagnate if I only had the perspective of one character. So I decided to have all the characters telling the story differently through the story! This also sort of helps fix the problem of Twilight apparently being out of character in the previous submission.
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