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Story from source: Noticed no one ever uploaded the last page of this story here. Better late than never, I suppose.
Finally…finished ;v;
Man XD actually I'm not that interested about wining this contest, I just really wanted to draw it XD And it helped me to realize that i need to start shading my pictures :I
Like always I'm really sorry for all my mistakes ;v; I need to find someone to help me with translating. ;v;
I hope you'll enjoy ;v;/
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Golden Delicious greeted the dawn with loud yawn, as he streched his back. Despite today was his big day, he slept good this night. He tried to slid of the bed gently, to not wake up his sleeping cousin, but probably it wasn't necessary. Even Pinkie Pie's party wouldn't wake up little Api now. Del left his room and took his steps to bathroom, almost tripping over something big. When he looked down he froze for a moment.

AJ:…super…model…

RJ:…N-not here Lance…auntie will hear…

CC: isn't even able to mumble

GD: M-Mom?…em…are you…

AJ: Noble…jerks…

GD: pause Ok, you are not ok. Ehhh, what to do? he looked at the clock on the wall. He still had a little time. Del reached for her mother to put her in bed when she opened her eyes

AJ: Hands off! I am married…ouch, ouch, ouch… she mumbled before she covered her ears, surprised by her shout. Hangover hit her like a train Del…what you are doing here sugar?

GD:…It's our hallway mom. Could you tell what does it…oh no,no,no,no… he turned around to not look and Candy and RedJune on the floor Apples, apples, apples…

AJ: We were just drinking a little she murmured with hand on her head. Where is her hat anyway? She looked down at the sleeping girls Phew, kids have so weak heads these days. Wait, I'll try to separate Candy from June.

CC: Noooh again…

GD: He was standing in silent, letting his mother do her job Ma'…you are still worried about this right?

AJ: …

GD: Of course you are… You know, I was really nervous before I told you about that. We all have put a lot of work on that. Creme asked her parents to find some nice flat for me in Canterlot. slight chuckle Of course they bought it for me without asking, these are these kind of ponies.

AJ:…

GD: However, I haven't visited this house yet. I would feel bad by just taking it like that. Trough last months I worked at some places. Clarie was helping me the most, she found me a job and…well…she kept asking if I already told you.

AJ:…

GD: I'm sorry that I haven't told you before. I just…knew that you will be worried. I couldn't watch you acting like that for that long, but I can't stop now….Now when I'm thinking about it I see that it was unfair for you.

AJ:…

CC: I can't feel my feet…

GD: Mom?

AJ:…takes a big breath Go take care of yourself sugar, I'll make you some sandwiches.

GD: …Wait, what? I thought that we had this special talk…

AJ: Come on, we can't let these Canterlot ponies think that we are stinky. Ol'Granny Smith would kill me for that. Eyyy, June…wake up sunshine, you'll have to help me.

RJ: Nouuuuuu….

GD: looks at his mother confused

AJ: …Next time just don't hide these things from me, got that? goes to the kitchen

GD: finally manages to give her a little smile Yeah…thank you mom…WAIT LOOK OUT FOR CAN…

CC: OUCH!

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At the train station

Claire: Ok, are you sure you have brought everything? looks at his suitcases…You want to move in on one trip?

GD: Uncle Mac wanted to help me with packing…

Prism: So, you will work as a cook in Canterlot…without training. Too bad, you was "this" close to finally race with me…Now I will be happy if you won't roll instead of trotting.
Claire: Ok…

GD:…Don't worry Prism, if you will ever want to get your ass kicked…I'll roll there for you. brohoof

Annie: Here, here boys. Shake your hoofs, kiss eachother and let pack Goldie to this train. Where are the suitca…*gets catched by T, so she wouldn't trip over one.

T: I'm not that romantic as Prism. Good luck there Del.

GD: Thanks chuckles before looking around. Where is Star?

Claire: She is waiting for us in Canterlot, helping Creme with your flat. If we want to see Creme in one piece we'll have to hurry.

AJ: looks at her son with small smile, when she noticed kids waiting for something Oh no sugar, I haven't sign for any emotional "goodbye's" today…just call your old mother when you'll arrive, ok?

GD: Sure ma'

Del nodded trough chuckling, and kissed his mother's forehead before turning his head to Candy. She was hanging on AppleJack's shoulder, but then she moved a little like she could feel that he's watching her

CC: Could you put me down? I want to say goodbye.

Del helped her to stand on her own hoofs. He was kinda worried by her condition, but most of ponies ended like that drinking with his mother. He caught himself at that he haven't checked if she was ok this morning. It made him feel kinda bad.

CC: she looked at him still dizzy When you will visit us again?

GD: he tried to not look at her half curled hair. It was so…unusual to see her in that state. He always thought that she would bring a party-cannon when he would leave. Soon, maybe on holida…

Claire: DEL! All things are packed…hurry up!

GD: Oh sorry. Take care of yourself CeeCee, ok? Candy? he looked down in confused when she leaned her forehead on his chest. Are you ok?

Candy: Del…she murmured pining her hands to his shirt. He patted her head kinda lost

GD: Candy…I will be back really so…

Candy: BLARRRRGHHHH!

GD:…

Aj:…

Claire:…

Prism:…

T:… covers Annie's eyes

Annie: Emm…T honey? Do you remember that I'm blind?…I can feel a vomit.

GD: internally screaming

Train: CHOO CHOO!

Prism: brusted out laughing trying to stay on his hoofs. He kept laughing even when Claire hit him

Claire: DAMN IT PRISM! OUR LUGGAGE! T, PRISM! DO SOMETHING! There, there Del, don't look down.

Prism: barely flying because of laughter

GD: Claire…my T-shirt?

Claire: No, no, don't think about it darling…

GD: …my jeans?

Claire: No…

GD: Shoes?

Claire: I can't see them from here…

CC: I can…I'm sorry Del…hanging on his shirt whining I'M SHOO SHORRRYYYYYYYY! DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL!!!!

GD: Here, here…trembling voice…I understa-

CC: BLAAAAARGH! they can hear Prism's laughter again


AJ: I thought that you will keep him in…other way. But I can't complain…

Claire: AUNTIE!
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So in the end Del had to stay…and wait for another train XD I guess it's the end of this history. Again I'm really sorry for all mistakes.

I haven't wrote the reason why they ended sleeping in the hallway, mostly because I couldn't find anything that would sound less silly XD In my mind AppleJack knocked out June with Candy, and decided to stay with them till they'll "woke up"…yeah XD Better I'll just leave it for your imagination.

Also I need to use more dads in my pictures ._. I'm kinda disappointed by myself that I haven't used Caramel here. It could look like he is dead or something ono

First part: >>766966
Second part: >>770969

All characters except AppleJack belongs to kilala97



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Posted previously at: 2018-03-01T20:12:28
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