So I decided to do The Category Two Entry, since he looked like a fun OC to redesign!
I can honestly say That I am happy with how this piece turned out. It's one of the better drawings I've done recently.
I didn't change Delta very much, the most notable thing was getting rid of the sort of dragonish tail in place of a regular horse tail, mainly because I wasn't able to draw it correctly to keep it looking nice.
I darkened the colors of his original palette slightly but enough to tell the teo palettes apart. I also added a few more spots on his coat to give him a more real horse look. And I added stripes on his hooves cause I thought it looked nice.
The mane has been changed from a more messy look on the original to a much kept look, fixing the placement of the colors more so it doesn't look like a hot mess in my opinion.
So the design was kep mostly the same, with a darker palette change, added features with more spots and striped hooves, and a whole mane redo with a regular horse tail rather than the elongated tail.
I do hope to like it, I know it's not very different, but I think it's a nice design different enough from the original the be considered a makeover!~ <3