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i know it's not great but i'm almost done with this dream sequence

so what is going on well griffin does not like what he has done like killing that guy and him crying shows he has humanity sure the story shows it as a what if thing but the murder thing happened and the crying did happen because why else would it be in the story in the first place, a summery says that maybe the writer whats to give a contradiction to what Kemp think about griffin? maybe to show that killing anyone even one who has done bad things is wrong? idk but to me it did happen that's why there was even a mentioned of a murder and crying from an unknown source in the first place so i say it did happen

the other thing is that griffin even after that was still crazy (because anything wrong mentally does not go away easy note: i'm no psychiatrist but it's true that these kinds of things don't go away easy and there are people who need help) that is why i put Matthew so he can help griffin) and still tries to get back at Kemp and is still insane sadly

and the mob (idk if it was with normal civilians or officers or both but it does not matter) went on to kill griffin in the most terrible way by beating him to death and i'm sure it was him crying for mercy and the story said there was chocking most likely griffin chocking before dying

griffin seeing this in his dream (more like nightmare) tried to get away from the mob but is stuck like what happened to sweetie belle in her dream but when he saw himself getting beat he was able to get unstuck and try to stop the crowd

again reallly dark no matter if it's human or pony it's very sad for griffin and if the story in the beginning or in the middle said how was griffin's life as a child (when the only hint of it was how he felt in the town and if they read a summery it's an extension of his former self i.e a normal person like you or me but just albino) that it was normal and happy maybe with a few mean kids making fun of him because of his appearance but still able to make good friends, find love (but perhaps broke up due to normal reasons people break up maybe it was the college idk) and loved his family people might understand more and it would be more of a tragic story of a normal guy wanting to be great but it actually lead to his downfall but i guess people need read more into things sometimes but what would i know it's just my way of thinking

ok won't say no more you get the idea

also idk when really but i DO want to make backgrounds better so i won't say what i do but once i get the necessary tools and programs (and also i'll practice and maybe upload them) hopefully things will be different

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Posted previously at: 2020-06-12T21:45:05 | Posted previously by: Mr100dragon100